Does this sound intriguing?

The way you're writing this sounds like you're making fun of someone who is way overly dramatic. He could not.. or would not? But did not. Over and over again, we get it. Way too much detail, it really seems like you yourself as the author has no idea what's going on or what the hell you're even talking about. Any idea what the plot could be? YOU don't even know? It really sounds like it from your story.